The question of financing in medical science has always been an important point for the authorities. In particular, it has become apparent that people are especially concerned such an aspect of the topic at hand who really must invest money in medicine. It is my firm belief that government, first of all, should think about public health and consequently money should be spent on researches in medicine. In the rest of this essay, I will proceed with arguments In support of my stance.
While there are a number of ways to justify my position, one main argument in this debate is that health for every citizen is the most crucial concern; government can develop none of the spheres of human life while a nation has a problem with health. In history, there are many examples when a disease took a great deal of lives, in that period life in the whole country was frozen and all off strengths were aimed at resistance of pandemic.
A different yet principal reason is that if people in a country are health, economics rises, standard of living becomes better, people invent more and more new technologies.
On the other hand, there are rare genetic diseases that hits not all population but only one person. In that, case the researches of the disease can be interesting only for the sick and he has to pay his own money for investigations. I leave this argument without merits because authorities should invest money in every medicine problem, because of giant sum of scientific researches, which common person cannot afford.
Taking everything into account, I wholeheartedly endorse the idea that sphere of health care needs in support of governments, since it is the most significant aspect for every human being.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, really, so, while, as to, in particular, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89726027397 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69354921172 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.338765063 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102106275802 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373072541002 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420686435214 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483946372184 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036633922315 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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