Every year several languages die out Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

In the contemporary era, unfortunately, dying out of some languages is a common fact. However, some people assert that it makes communication easier to have fewer languages. Admittedly, I completely believe that all languages should be preserved owing to the following reasons.
To begin with, the most compelling reason is that the language of an area is an important part of its identity. It shows the customs, culture, and traditions of a people's community. When a language dies out, all things relevant to it gradually would disappear. Take stories and myth are inherited from ancestors as an example. These valuable heritages which demonstrate historical events and even basic people life are bound to fade. Moreover, if the forthcoming generations find a property such as handwritten which belongs to decades ago could not read and understand it because of this language elimination.
Yet another axiomatic argument is that when a language in the area dies out, that society should choose another language. Although this decision leads communities to globalization, the drawbacks threat them are by no means negligible. Simply put, lots of words that have special meaning in the previous language would be removed because there is no particular expression for them in the alternative language. Take Turkish which changed its written language from Arabic to English and leads society to westernization as an example. A large volume of words that did not have a matching word in the new language was eliminated. To put it differently, many concepts, customs, and beliefs behind each word are bound to end.
In conclusion, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that, all languages should be saved. This is mainly because a language describes the culture and values of a community and has a strong impression on people's lifestyles.

Votes
Average: 7.2 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25581395349 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99071236289 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8717628901 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0588235294 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28571820537 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850147218302 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517512961443 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18117346333 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041237402434 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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