Everyone deserves to be educated. It's unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to private universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
Although universities are for anyone, especially those who want to pursue their dream and success, the college fees are such exorbitant budgets that not all of us can afford. A solution requiring government financial support for helping all types of students is suggested. In my view, I disagree entirely with this idea because of several reasons, which will be discussed below.
First and foremost, In terms of government, It is nearly impossible for them to invest that much money in education because they have a lot of ground that needs to be covered, including medicine and agriculture. Even though many countries are cutting off educational fees like Germany or Japan, none of them can completely scratch it out, especially in developing regions. Moreover, in the world economic crisis caused by an infectious disease, where education is no longer the priority for the government, The future for anyone to go to school is unrealistic.
Turning to students’ and parents’ views, the financial supply for university can affect school performances. In detail, no charge can lead to unappreciation among students. Additionally, people with financial burdens can work one's way to education or take a year gap to earn money by themselves without reliance on government funds. For example, intelligent people can take advantage of their talents to get moral or professional jobs ranging from taxi drivers or office workers, which help them afford further education and provide them vital social skills.
In short, Potential students with disadvantaged backgrounds should take care of themselves rather than wait for money provisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, for example, in short, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38521400778 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94487499825 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669260700389 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3253436923 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222721068795 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752607310305 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334477007257 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120204162552 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318834789213 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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