Everyone deserves to be educated. It's unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to private universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
The problem of accessibility of education has been relevant since the establishing of the first universities. An opinion exists that all the people should be equal in opportunities to attend academies and colleges in spite of their socio-economic status. I completely agree with the above-mentioned point of view due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
I strongly believe that free tertiary learning provides a possibility to open the potential of talented students. It cannot be denied that not all the gifted individuals are able to pay for University, which can be extremely beneficial for THE attainment of their professional aims. As a result, some brilliant pupils cannot achieve the success they deserve due to the lack of financial support. For example, if the higher education in USSR had not been subsidized, F. Uglov would not have had an opportunity to obtain a medical degree and, subsequently, would have not become the famous cardiovascular surgeon. Thus, in order to give intelligent individuals a chance to be as much professionally successful as possible, all the people should have an access to higher learning equally.
Furthermore, the availability of education for all the segments of society may bring plenty of benefits to the country. Not only does increase in the number of educated humans lead to more stable national economy, but it also results in improvement the social aspects of the country. It has been observed that growth in the proportion of literate citizens contributes to the elimination of unemployment. For instance, in the USSR, where schools and universities were free for all the residents, the percentage of jobless humans was lower than in modern Russia, where students usually have to pay for tertiary learning. Hence, affordable academic education is often believed to be one of the keys to creation of a stable and prosperous society.
To conclude, I am firmly convinced that schools and universities should be available for all the humans despite their paying capacity. This primarily leads to the enhancement of socioeconomic situation of the country and helps talented students to achieve the goals they deserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28985507246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1418016924 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568115942029 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2687916823 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251659810526 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724136717828 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492129302595 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143833733106 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171635328099 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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