Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there has been an upsurge in the popularity of being an vegetarian on the grounds that products from meat have exerted negative impact on human’s well-beings. As a result, it is often suggested that people ought to comply a particular diet with principal menu which do not contain dishes related to meat with the aim of avoiding some certain diseases. Nevertheless, I whole-heartedly believe that this trend may do more harm than good and consumption of meat still plays a crucial role in people’s eating habit.
First and foremost, there is no denying that individuals can reap a lot of potential benefits of from eating meat. Animals’ products such as milk or eggs along with meat are a great source of integral nutrients which human body needs in order to function properly. Numerous substances in meat like protein and fat will support and promote digestion and convertion food and energy, which will definitely help people feel energetic, be capable of concentrating on their work better and intensify their productivity. Especially for children and youngsters, they require a wide range of pivotal diets to intend for comprehensive developments particularly their bones and brains. Without meat, it is more likely that people will suffer from such disorders or many diseases such as malnutrition or rickets. Consequently, in their meal, it is vital to include variety kind of food for example meat, fish, flour along with vegetables in preference to a simple menu that only has food of vegetarians.
Furthermore and even more essentially, meat has a great contribution in the process of development of resistance system of human. A healthy diet which contains meat in moderation will be able to boost individual’s immune system especially for young people since it is extremely momentous to supplement trace substances such as iron, copper for elements for body.
Last but not least, the scenario that all people in the world take vegetarians’ diet is quite unrealistic. The choice of food is one’s own privilege and no one is aptitude for imposing their interests on the others. Besides, the fall in consumption of meat can have adverse influence on the world’s economy particularly the meat industry. Without customers to buy their products, many companies and factories will be on the verge of bankrupting, which is a reason for the increment in the unemployment rate and cause another inning of economic crisis.
To sum up, much as vegetarian’s diet is very beneficial for people, eating meat in limitation is still an indispensable part in everyday life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15694533606 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2148059779 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.8125 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147257211374 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549527541095 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363777350343 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952203169868 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027658403764 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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