Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
some serious health problems are caused by meat, therefore a part of people believe that eating vegetables as daily basis should be done by everyone. This essay is partly agrees with that statement as the reasons below.
Firstly, Consuming organic foods regularly can improve someone's condition since it contains highly nutritional value. many beneficial components such as iron, magnesium, and zinc are available in vegetables. Because of those minerals are considered as vital need for the body, consuming it will enhance the health. For example, nowadays children are forced to eat vegetables, sometimes, by their parents. As a result, not only do they obtain a healthy body, but they also get better physical shape.
On the other hand, while meat are regarded to the source of health problems such as cholesterol, they also contain irreplaceable nutritional value. animals protein are one of the most vital value for the body, besides the minerals which have been mentioned before. so important is the nutrition that by avoiding it will result to the protein deficiency. Furthermore, it will cause more fatal disease such as body deformation. The children in some african regions for instance; as the result of meat resource are so scarcely there, their parents could not able to fulfill the animal protein needs for their children. Now as we can see, many african youngsters are suffering malnutrition and often their belly are found in a ballooning shape.
In conclusion, while vegetables offer a lot of positive things such as nutritional value, so do is meat. However, if someone neglect to consume meat completely, they probably will get some serious health troubles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72111088426 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8972490685 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187091180343 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590230849297 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595135038025 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1327576791 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825058830297 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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