Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Vegetarian is becoming more and more popular in the world. Therefore, more and more people thinks that everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. In my point of view, I totally agree of this opinion mostly for two reasons.
The first reason is vegetarian diet makes you healthier. Not absorbing animal fat prevents you from traumatic health disease such as heart attack, diabetes and so on. You can find protein from beans. Consequently, eating meat is unnecessary.
The second reason is vegetarian is more humane since you can get all source of vitamin from plants, beans and vegetables, killing animals seam cruel and unnecessary. Besides from that, vegetarian protect the earth's ecosystem.
In conclusion, vegetarian diet is good for your health and it's more humane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...sides from that, vegetarian protect the earths ecosystem. In conclusion, vegetarian...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 135.0 315.596192385 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15555555556 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6364959911 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.974260213 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3514967085 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125552151641 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155729821842 0.0667982634062 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17694879835 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139495106912 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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