The affects on environment caused by humans, which was always debatable, have now become more controversial. The substantial influence of governments have sparked the controversy over the potential impact on environment in recent years. In my opinion, both people and governments play an important role to minimise the damage on nature. This essay will elaborate this opinion of mine in greater details and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous ways how humans are damaging the environment, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that human beings have wild nature with them, which means that they have the tendency to act in ways which can be harmful for both the nature and others around them. For instance, smoking causes major damage to the people around them. Moreover, it also causes air pollution, which severely impacts the environment. Actions like cutting down trees, burning coal and so on, all contributes to damaging the environment.
Approaches to deal with the setbacks originated from human behaviours are innumerable, but the most effective one is that government should implement some strict rules, which can human behaviours under control. For instance, setting up some designated smoking zone. Some outside these zones should result in some severe penalties. Moreover, individual people should try get rid of their actions or behaviours, which can harm the environment.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that, to reduce the damage on environment, everyone needs to work together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...nstance, smoking causes major damage to the people around them. Moreover, it also causes air pollution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33734939759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76610343342 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9806018788 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310944395839 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927236389628 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618464034956 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170138910174 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630986788683 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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