Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
It is true that humans are causing irreparable damages to the Earth's environment, and this will have a long-term devastating consequence to the planet. In my opinion, both governments and individuals must take immediate actions to improve the situation.
On the one hand, governments can certainly play a vital role in protecting our planet. They have the power to issue laws to discourage the use of fossil fuels, such as gas, old or coal. These are the main sources of Carbon Dioxide which is causing global warming phenomenon. In return, they can subsidise and encourage factories to use the energy from renewable sources, like sun or wind power. Furthermore, they can set a strict law to place a heavy fine, or event to ban, to manufacturers that try to release untreated industrial wastewater to the environment which will contaminate the soil and waterbody.
On the other hand, there are several activities individuals can do to significantly reduce the earth's pollution. Firstly, we can use energy in an efficient way, we need to turn off all electronic and electric devices when they are not needed. We can also try to use public transport instead of a private vehicle, and avoid using air travel when possible. Secondly, we should try to reuse and recycle things as much as possible to reduce unnecessary waste dumping to the environment. Last but not least, we would buy products with less packaging or with the packaging that made from degradable materials.
In conclusion, I believe that individuals as well as national governments need to immediately take measures to stop polluting the earth in order to protect our planet for our future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... pollution. Firstly, we can use energy in an efficient way, we need to turn off all electronic and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05017921147 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91455376617 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => More articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1590217768 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts,knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191946993069 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620752612668 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04261659313 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973656494483 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311273477623 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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