Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
It is true that the environment is being threatened by a series of negative human activities. There are several reasons why this is the case, and this essay will provide some measures to make government, as well as individuals, address this problem.
Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. The first one is that the gas emission from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles are direct discharge into the atmosphere, which increases the amount of CO2 and lead to global warming. This phenomenon might have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. Another issue is that overpopulation is also producing an ever greater amount of waste. Which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
Some actions could be taken by the government to reduce environmental pollution. Firstly, The government could introduce laws to limit companies' use of fossil fuels or to force them to utilize renewable energy from solar, win water power. In addition, they could impose green taxes on drivers or airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore cutting down emissions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16494845361 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77788665485 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2442833504 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109219008076 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360937080141 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027984566158 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681576007331 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237035459424 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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