Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Should you pay taxes that support universal education? This is a debatable topic. Many affluent families send their children to private schools for better facilities and teaching methods that enable a holistic development of a child. This trend has a sever impact on the working class families that aspire to provide the best for their wards. Many individuals pay taxes to support universal education that their children do not avail.

Undoubtedly, the quality of education that children receive in government run schools is deplorable. Firstly, the lack of funds towards facilities. For example, in a country like India many schools do not have the basic amenities such as a library, a play ground, and classroom. The money allocated is insufficient to build a good infrastructure. Secondly, inadequate training for the teachers. For example,teachers need to adopt a innovative and creative approach to make learning a beautiful experience for children.

Interestingly, despite the high tuition fee in private schools, parents are willing to admit their wards to such institutions. Firstly, the non-refundable admission fee that these institute charge. For example, the National School diverts the money received as one time admission fee towards uplifting the school building and maintenance. Secondly, the tuition fee that is collected is invested in can be invested in adopting innovate teaching methods.surplus cash flow. For example, the Klay School conducts a mandatory training for teachers to help children with special learning needs.

In conclusion, although the quality of education in private institutes are better, the lack of funds is the reason for the inefficiency in running a government school. Hence, taxes that support universal education is very crucial for a developing country like India where many people are impoverished. In my opinion, you must pay taxes only for the services that you would avail.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4932885906 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04653080391 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536912751678 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1442392715 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1578947368 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233955173175 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784208803094 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084920473726 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155846339239 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107308101757 0.056905535591 189% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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