Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
According to the constitution of most of the democracies around the world and various Human Resource organizations , Universal education is a basic fundamental right to be provided to all of its citizens free of cost. The Governments of the nations are responsible to fulfill this duty and perform this responsibility by levying taxes on its residents. So I absolutely do not believe that families who don't send their children to government-financed school should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.
I can present a couple of reasons on why I don't opine with the topic. Firstly, the money families pay to Government will go into running a school, providing scholarships and aids to poor and needy children , additionally this move can socially empower a society by uplifting an economically weaker section.
For example , millions of for-profit institution going kids' pay taxes to the Government , who uses them on education of the kids of the BPL(below poverty line) category, who get socially uplifted through this exercise by being eligible for jobs. They will finally income someday and become taxpayers, thus supporting another impoverished child. This cycle will overall turn a third-world country into a first-world country by improving the nation's growth parameters such as GDP.
Secondly , if such a tax-exemption is introduced regarding education the government will be potentially facing a loss of approximately a billion dollars as more people would enroll their posterity in a private-funded school. For example with the reduction in the taxes , government would have to shell out money from government-run educational institutes to run themselves, thus leading to a slow death of such institutions as they would be unable to upgrade their facilities to meet the standards and would therefore stand to lose many bright students.
So I strongly believe that government must not make such a diastrous policy move because not only will it affect the future of a hundreds of thousands of poverty-ridden children and an entire generation but also will affect the Nation's economy, especially if it is a rapidly growing economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34210526316 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20798167897 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593567251462 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3775759261 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.090909091 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325779464628 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120451422408 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142449622128 0.0667982634062 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162730061099 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12229981468 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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