Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
"You can either be a tiger in a hole and a fox elsewhere or be a tiger everywhere." This statement is echoes the sentiment of the topic I will discuss now on whether according to young people's opinion it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, or to live in their hometowns their whole lives.
"Life begins always at the end of your comfort zone." This proverb throws in the strongest weight behind the proposition to move out of the homeland. Firstly, outside your home area you are completely on your own. For example it is analogous to playing a cricket match outside on a foreign soil. So, one strong step realigns their mindset just as a captain decides for a different strategy on outside home nations. They become adept in making decisions for themselves and can read the situations and adapt themselves to it. Thus, they create their own identity. Secondly, leaving the house gives you a sense of freedom, independence and responsibility. The person becomes the boss of his wishes. The youth understands the pangs of life, the fight to survive and this struggle grinds them from inside to make them more resilient. For example, my father came to Calcutta away from his hometown of Darjeeling with just 3 suitcases and after going tough for 20 years , he now enjoys the fruits of his labor in form of a stable, high-paying job with a car and a nice cozy bungalow. It is his internal fighting spirit that has brought him here , something he would have never achieved if he lived in Darjeeling.
To counterargue, not many can survive the hardships of setting up a new establishment elsewhere. They always need a back-up support mechanism to hold their backs in order to dig in. For example, my father in the initial of arrival was fully dependent on uncle for monetary help and at times went hungry to save money. So, staying in hometown can save the younger people from the pain of being a struggler before earning success.Mental peace is also a big factor which is amplified by the fact that when nouveau adults stay close to their loved ones they succeed faster with struggling much because of familial ties which gets them the things done. For example, my nephew's dad who lives till today in Jamshedpur is dentist by profession. He quickly settled there near his ancestral home and makes a good living with strong ties to local businessmen who support him.
So, I believe that both the paths are challenging in their own ways but to live alone and then set up a living is a different game altogether. If the person believes that he can cross the Rubicon ( and take Rome ) , he must not hesitate. Self-belief is the determinant here that will tell whether he lives or goes away.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74213836478 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63126237131 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595387840671 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7219003287 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.818181818 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6818181818 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310190068568 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713394574916 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906093430334 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160263607561 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121542409214 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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