Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is an old proverb that goes by the saying "Music is the sound of the soul. " Our world is separated by religions, cultures, geographical barriers, economic dividers to name a few but is united by the sound of music. I genuinely believe and fully agree to the fact that to attract people of different class, nationality, caste, age and religion music is the perfect magnet.
To start with, music is the universal language of expression of human emotions. A soulful music has the power to bring out the inner voice of a person. It has a ability to move souls and hearts like no other. Two completely different people of different nationality can connect, bond over and even befriend each other based on their love for Music. A perfect example to celebrate this is my nephew, Jay. While working in Manchester, he worked as a singer and a pianist in a music bar. This is where he met his lady love and future wife, Shazia. They met on a Saturday evening and bonded over their mutual love for Md. Rafi, Lata Mangeshkar, Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan, Beatles and Freddy Mercury. After a dating each other for a couple of years, they got hitched in a private ceremony. Besides, Jay was a Hindu while Shazia, a practicing Muslim when they met. Their religious identities and age difference proved to be a non-barrier in their lives which was steadfastly bound by their love for music.
Additionally, musical sound is not created keeping in mind a particular age group or generation. It charms anyone and everyone from a eight-year old boy to a eighty year old grandpa. Music is one phenomenon that keeps an old heart fresh and brings two broken hearts closer to join them. For example, my grandfather was a very foul-mouthed person. He was a short-tempered man who in the fit of rage one day threw my dad out of his house as a punishment. My father, angered by this demeanor left the ancestral home to find shelter elsewhere. Both of them have been at loggerheads ever since. Last year, when my grandfather was seriously ill and he was brought to a hospital in Kolkata for check-up, I heard my father humming to an old Kishore Kumar song and a teary-eyed grandfather was listening to him. The father-son duo then wept and finally hugged each other signaling an end to the old feud. So, music again played the match-maker and peace broker here.
So, in a nutshell, music is the primal sound of nature that has a healing touch. It has a power to perform miracles and hence must be treasured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, hence, if, so, then, while, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64334085779 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67281396498 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580135440181 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2502402661 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1153846154 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0384615385 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96153846154 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141148135497 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369643658493 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455752940349 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842982522865 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497114730187 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.