Whether or not it is required to pay taxes that support universal education, for families who do not send children to government-financed schools, is a controversial issue nowadays. In my view, this is not required, and I believe that tax paying should not be taken to make it appropriate.
Cases like wealthy families who have always wished to offer children a good school. These kids, who are provided with individual learning, enjoy both proper conditions and treatments at school. So, when people are affordable to costly private colleges, it is certainly acceptable for them to avoid extra taxes payment of local schools, which cannot give benefits for sure. As we all know, parents wish to provide their kids the best, by means of focusing the amount of proportion spent on the status and quality of college their children attend. It is no doubt that without paying taxes is acceptable for them, for the sake of their children.
However, having said this, it must be admitted that what parents pay for is for teachers’ teaching to students. I am convinced that teachers are the one who provide all patience and learning to students, let alone the fact that students who have areas of improvement on study. Salaries should be paid to them, let alone the salaries to private school teachers. It is considered as unfair treatment. Their only payback is taxes, which parents must be required to pay.
In conclusion, I profess that parents are not required to pay taxes, but on the other hand, it is open-and-shut that the teachers’ situation have to be considered and I do believe that taxes should be paid to them as their reward.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not it is required to pay taxes that suppor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, in conclusion, no doubt, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93189964158 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83544941486 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0030680698 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349784917701 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119751684554 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105177896057 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235541476146 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120715192629 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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