Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

parents are admitting their children in public schools because they may include no taxes, which is most-likely in the favor of provience's education system. I totally disagreed with this argument. however, In this essay we will consider negative aspects, thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

Firstly, paying tax in any form that would be return to us in many situation. In other words, police, fire-brigade, hospitals, and so on. they are working to help people in their own way so, why would we spend extra for studies? Well, To support poor pupils who do not have money to adapt degree. For instantiate, when a single parent pay more funds for their child's better education that will directly go to eduaction-minister in the form of tax and that is the inhert of government schools. Moreover, lower class families can afford.

Secondly, Nowadays the government school's study not so good. however, with the help of the taxes it may be at peak in few years. For example, richer parents go for best schools and they help poor children without even knowing that, and i think that if they deducted taxes from private schools government school can be locked-down.

To concluded, There may be a lot of difficulties poor class have to deal with i would be a great public schools raise the amount of taxes. That will definitly improve government schooling system along with that employment would be at its peak

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ass have to deal with i would be a great public schools raise the amount of taxes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90833333333 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70385527226 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5762265279 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262899737421 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852263950774 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474682507805 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153597973184 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00922029981611 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments