These days, opinions are divided on whether parents who have children attending independent school should contribute to the public schools through paying taxes or not. The former, in many cases, should be beneficial.
First, tax payments are considered a civic duty, also a requirement of the law. That means each family, namely middle-class households and wealthier families, have to pay their fair share to support the government to invest in the country and provide services for the benefit of residents, especially in school education. Admittedly, people in different income groups should pay different rates of taxes in that affluent families generally pay more of their incomes in taxes than the rest of others . However, Choosing private schools for their kids means they are higher taxpayers.. If wealthy family were given a tax discount for sending their children to independent school, it would be treated unfairly.
Second, paying taxes contributes substantially to the development of the national education department. That is to say, young people have equal opportunities to attend school owing to government enhancement of the quality of teaching and learning. This increases a great amount of well-educated workforce, who would be high earners resulting in higher tax payments and higher payments to social support . For example, a company owner will need well-qualified employees, therefore, a well-founded education system can provide such employees.
In conclusion, for all the aforementioned reasons, I believe that parents of offspring studying at preparatory school would be responsible for paying taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in many cases, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64634146341 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03707739445 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7747007357 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318297441533 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108612088498 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529340885161 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174157690382 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692096679432 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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