families who send their kids to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people argue that families who send their kids to go to private school do not need to pay taxes for the national education system. Personally, I completely disagree with this view.
There are several reasons to explain why we need to pay taxes for the state education system. First of all, paying taxes for the government is a duty that every citizen needs to pay. For example, when their kids begin to take exam graduation which governments need to take tax money to organize it, so every household has a responsibility to pay taxes for the nation. In addition, the government does not force rich families to bring their children to learn at private schools so tax discount for them is unnecessary. Therefore, wealthy families when deciding to send their kids to private schools should mentally prepare themselves to pay higher taxes than to exchange for high-quality education. For example, a company that owned a private school will need well-qualified and competent staff, and a well-funded education system can provide such employees. This provides good chances for students on their study path and a high chance to get a job.
In my opinion, It is positive for every class in society to have a high-quality education. Furthermore, to make it true, every citizen needs to pay tax for the government so they can support the community by increasing the education system and supporting poor families to have a chance to bring their kids to go to school with discount tuitions. This helps nations create many well-educated workforces which will increase their national economy rapidly.
In conclusion, I do not believe people who decide to bring their kids to study at a private education will decline their tax for the education system.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9897260274 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77623575869 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503424657534 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2956999828 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36248416698 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154019009033 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998593473928 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28756274674 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865498883654 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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