In recent years, fast foods are becoming more and more popular among people. While this trend considered to be positive by some people, some opponents existed about this argument. In this essay, both points of views will be discussed.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, in today's world, poverty and lack of money for buying food have made a great demand of finding cheap foods. In fact, the low cost of fast foods has helped its popularity and made it accessible everywhere. In other word, when it comes to comparison, these kind of foods are much less expensive than that of healthy foods which require fresh raw materials and costly ingredients. Thus, the family's expenditure would reduce if they use these kind of dishes.
On the other hand, however, others argue that the demerits of fast food can cause a series of diseases on people's bodies and in the long-term the cost of treatments would be so much high. Indeed, these sort of foods has a considerable amount of salt, fat cheese, sugar which are the main factors of heart attack and high blood pressure. Therefore, it would not be reasonable if people consume these foods for their cheapness because the cost of treatment the illnesses they cause is significant.
In way of conclusion, although the low price of fast foods may convince people to eat them, in comparison with the high expenditure of the treatment that these foods caused it would be negligible. My standpoint on this issue is about to avoid consuming these unhealthy foods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ther word, when it comes to comparison, these kind of foods are much less expensive than t...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ys expenditure would reduce if they use these kind of dishes. On the other hand, howeve...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'these nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; these nulls
...eatments would be so much high. Indeed, these sort of foods has a considerable amount of s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in fact, kind of, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8828125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53909855744 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7659657823 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213606061808 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844452351229 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786620597212 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143366639988 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953512349008 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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