Fever young people play sports these days. Why is this? Whatcan be done to encourage more young people to do sports?
Nowadays, sports are played by a less number of youngsters. This is because of the upcoming technology and young ones can be encouraged to play games by giving them good rewards.
Internet is the key reason because of which young ones are not taking parts in game. They are likely to spend their time on social media applications and on using the technology. They become introvert as they do not want to go outside and to meet other people as they are delightful in spending their time on social networking site or playing games on their mobile phone and computers. For instance, people in the past few decades stay together and play together. Everywhere we saw there were childrens playing together. However, these days if we see a group of people sitting altogether in a park, they all will remain busy in their mobile phones. This is how technology snatches their time which they can indulge into sports.
This can be done by giving good offers to the young ones to play sports. Parents should have to encourage their little ones to take part in games in this exchange they can give their children great rewards. In the institutes, teachers also have to approach students to take part into sports by giving them extra marks in their studies. Because of this they can effortlessly score in both of their studies and sports at one time. For example, colleges are giving admissions to the students on sports quota. Every average student can take admission in a big college or university with the help of sports. This can promote youngsters to take part into games.
In conclusion, adults play lesser games these days as a result of increasing technology day-by-day and they can be encouraged by offering them better gifts by which they can easily take part in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78827361564 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45857357576 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504885993485 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2931411501 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4705882353 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239201286915 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858472889151 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618372785637 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168606333637 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463642925666 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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