Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?
Films have increasingly enjoyed widespread popularity as a means of entertainment. People firmly believe that they are able to acquire more interesting knowledge of the nation where they origin. With the enormous development, we can watch films on the theatre, at home or even through the Internet,personally, it is no doubt that we can gain more information about a country's culture, its landscape and history as follows.
First and foremost, the variety of customs and cultural diversity are known as special features by more people all over the world. We have an understanding of how special clothes they wear on daily life are or the way they hold annual festivals. For instances, while Vietnamese people choose " ao dai" to become their own traditional clothes, Korean wear "Hanbok" on special occasions such as Lunar New Year and so on. Moreover, we gradually become aware of each nation's symbols such as Ha Long Bay of Vietnam, the Eiffel Tower of France or London Eye of England through seeing movies.
The next point I want to mention is tourism attraction. Knowledge of wonders all over the world will be likely to be improved as the fact that many attractive destinations are introduced through movies. If you are not provided with opportunities to travel to these places, you will be amazed at how picturesque the landscape in the world are through televisions. From my personal experiences, although I am not able to afford to visit Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleums in Vietnam, I am still confident about the knowledge of it by watch documentary films.
Last but not least, there are several films about historical events. This category of film is so attractive for people who own a passion for history. Some films based on Chinese history provide you with many valuable information about the past of China. Additionally, even though some opeople having interest in historical monuments are unable to stand chances to visit them, with watching films, you can see many national monuments in the world.
By way of conclusion, films are considered to be a kind of relaxation, you also get many abundant knowledge about country where they come from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05571030641 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97323196488 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58217270195 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8140604744 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245573396157 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760276913642 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747843698311 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154429573552 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916450983025 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.