Financial education should be a mandatory component of school program. What extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
Finance is undoubtedly an indispensable part of every aspects of our life. With the incredible development of the world along with high living standard, there is a rise in the need for financial education for our young generation. It is often argued that students should have the chance to learn financial literacy as a compulsory subject of the school curriculum. In my point of view, I whole-heartedly agree with this motion
To commence with, in all likelihood, students will reap a lot of benefits from attending financial education classes. Initially, it supplies children and youngsters fundamental understandings about the monetary system as well as some momentous skills in order to be capable of managing their finance successfully. Lacking of financial education, people definitely find it extremely demanding to be able to spend and invest money radically and easily end up in debts or other financial problems. In addition to that, learning about finance at a young age is undeniably an opportunity which can stimulate student’s interests in finance. Youngsters will be able to find their passion and can utilize it as a foundation to go further in their study. Moreover, adolescents who aspire to set up their own entrepreneurs can take advantage of this subject at school without having to enroll in other courses.
Apart from that, financial literacy is a motive for the national development. Individuals with good skills in financial management can make enormous contribution to diminish the possibility of a financial crisis for the country. They can also exert a profound impact on boosting the economy when making sound financial decision to earn and spend money. Every citizen accompany by a lot of companies, groups, etc will help to flourish wealth and make the country evolve prosperously.
T encapsulate, I strongly believe financial education should be a mandatory part of the school curriculum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31699346405 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13021575499 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4576493575 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.214285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222965986225 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758492186471 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766669151495 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165931793679 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807903743555 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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