One way to solve the problem of congestion on the roads is to increase the tax on private vehicles. How could this alleviate congestion? What other measures can you suggest to deal with congestion in cities?
In the past few years, there has been an overwhelming upsurge in the number of vehicles, which can result in traffic congestion. It is suggested that a rise in the tax on private transport is likely to be an efficacious solution. My following essay will clarify the effect of this idea and also propose several potential panaceas for this problem
At the outset, increasing the tax on transport may be a contributing factor to address traffic jam on the grounds that it can diminish the number of vehicles on the street significantly. The exorbitant cost of purchasing and maintenance expenses on traveling can make individuals utilize a more affordable transport such as buses as an alternative to private cars. Nonetheless, in all likelihood, this will not be a productive method in the long run. It only can minimize a few means of transportations which are owned by middle class and the poor in preference to an enormous volume of cars, supercars, motorbikes belonging to the upper class.
Therefore, people should take other more proactive measures to resolve this challenging issue. Initially, it is crucial for the government to invest a big fund of money with the aim of upgrading the transport infrastructure. Roads which have been adversely damaged need to be replaced and reinforced in quality. Furthermore, in developing countries the authority should develop more convenient means of transportation including subways, along with their own roads for each conveyance. Besides, smart devices for example CCVT, traffic lights which can monitor road conditions also play an integral role in alleviating traffic congestion. Moreover, strict laws should take effect with a view to inhibiting illegal parking, waiting, loading and unloading which can obstructs traffic flow, reduce capacity at junctions.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> </span><span style="font-size:14.0pt">To encapsulate, instead of raising tax on private vehicles, boosting the transport system and enforcing
laws should be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, as for, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86708860759 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.51727177307 2.80592935109 161% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8187945027 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.615384615 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131745874449 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495641278774 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265386584892 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471196828397 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480878356528 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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