The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Despite the fact that space exploration seems to have nothing in common with everyday life, it is hard to decline that first steps on the moon have changed mankind’s routine.
The main reason is the fact that technologies developed for space were later implemented into our lives. For instance, Bluetooth was not always used just to connect your airpods with an iphone, it was an innovation made to face the need of connection between astronauts. Furthermore, almost half of the innovations of automobile or even plains production was previously developed in favor of spaceships. The reason is that being one of the most important parts of the military complex of any country cosmonautics is a mere tool to emphasize the power of nation. Hence, the most innovative and progressive breakthroughs of engineering, medicine, chemistry and other fields of science were used to serve ‘a step forward for mankind’ and are still developing the sphere.
One more advantage of the first ‘moonwalk’ is the influence it had on the art industry including cinema, paintings, literature and even music. Space has always been one of the most mysterious sources of inspiration from ancient Greeks to Leonardo and further to the early 20th century fantasts such as Belyaev or Strugatskye. The first man on the Moon was an example of dream that came true, so more directors, writers and others were attracted to space theme. As a result of Gagarin’s, Armstrong’s and even Belka’s and Strelka’s flights there was a splash of cosmos films that is enlarging till today.
To sum up, the meaning of the space flights is not only in this achievement itself but also in the implementation of new technologies to everyday life. Even the creative sphere needs space trips as a source of new scenarios.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'plains'' or 'plain's'?
Suggestion: plains'; plain's
...f the innovations of automobile or even plains production was previously developed in ...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ace trips as a source of new scenarios.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07094594595 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95028002224 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4104110538 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154383368756 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495567677402 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424827822344 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804996922698 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489661846801 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.