Food products’ labels should contain detailed information about that food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What might be the most important information for food labels?
Up to the present, labels packing in the food occupy a pivotal role for human well-being and each individual has various distinct perspectives about food labels. Some people argue that the labels should include extensive information about the goods. I, personally, concur with this statement inasmuch as it is an indispensable material and this essay will address the explanations for my views as follows.
To begin with, a myriad of food products only offer a limited amount of information, therefore, the consumers are unable to grasp this items completely, which give the rise to numerous
repercussions. A meticulous label includes the product's name, its company, nutrition facts tables, list of ingredients, percent daily value, product dates and some notices. Some of them, however, are not placed in the packaging, resulting in customer confusion, inaccurate usage as well as detrimental for their health. For instance, a local bakery in Nghe An province produces breads packaged in plastic bags. In addition, its label is only a small piece of paper with simply the manufacturer's name and few components. It's worth noting that the label's expiration date is two months after the date of manufacturing, yet there's no production date on it. As a result, a multitude of people suffer food poisoning after eating bread that is beyond its maturity period.
By contrast, a label with thorough information does a favour for consumers in terms of the usage and elimination of items that are not compatible. Firstly, nutrition labels are often displayed as a panel or grid on the back or side of packaging which assist customers choose between products and keep a check on the amount of ingredients that are beneficial for their well-being or not. Besides, labels also provide instructions on how to use this product properly. Additionally, product dates with accurate production and expiry date help buyers know how long the items can utilize and should purchase before the penultimate day. Eventually, numerous products offer percentages of ingredients in terms of fat and calories allow consumers, particularly those who are obese, to take a closer look at the product and decide whether or not to take it.
Although the label contains a wealth of information, the far more paramount information is the notice which allows or warns customers in order to take it or leave it. Because not all people can use it and frequently cautions those with allergies not to use the product. For example, in the packaging of a packaged flour, the producer emphasises the notice to consumers with an advice that do not consume if allergic to wheat flour. If someone does not pay attention to this information and devours them, they will be in grave risk, and their lives may be affected.
To summarize, food products’ labels are an integral part of almost all products so we should make full use of it to have a profound insight into these products and opt for suitable goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8468327096 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5169378013 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316526840565 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939119844334 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554242265127 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174502744075 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059898057244 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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