Food products labels should contain detailed information about that food To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What might be the most important information for food labels

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Food products’ labels should contain detailed information about that food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What might be the most important information for food labels?

Up to the present, packing labels in the food occupy a pivotal role for human well-being. A soaring number of people argue that the labels should include extensive information about the goods. I, personally, concur with this statement inasmuch as it is an indispensable material for consumers when purchasing products which should include allergy warnings and percent daily values.
It is perceptible that a label with thorough information does a favour for consumers to avoid confused and inaccurate usage as well as health degradation. Firstly, nutrition labels assist customers choose between products and keep a check on the amount of ingredients that are beneficial for their well-being. Besides, labels also provide instructions on how to use this product properly. Additionally, product dates with accurate production and expiry date help buyers know how long the items can utilize and should purchase before the penultimate day. A woeful consequence happened in Nghe An province where a local bakery produced breads packaged in plastic bags with simply the manufacturer's name and few components on it. It is worth noting that the label's expiration date was two months after the date of manufacturing, yet there was no production date on it. As a result, a multitude of people suffered food poisoning after eating bread that was beyond its maturity period.
By far the paramount information listed on the labels is the notice giving a warning sign and percent daily values to customers. Recently, not all people can use a particular product, especially for those with allergies; therefore, this information is able to help consumers who have specific food allergies, to avoid those allergens that may be present in specific food products. For example, in the packaging of a packaged flour, the producer emphasises the notice to consumers with an advice that do not consume if allergic to wheat flour. Besides, percent daily values are listed in the right-hand column in percentages which provide how much of a nutrient a person will get from eating one serving of that food. If someone does not pay attention to this information and devours them, they will be in grave risk, and their lives may be affected.
To summarize, food products’ labels are an integral part of almost all products so we should make full use of it to have a profound insight into these products and opt for suitable goods.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 756, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'labels'' or 'label's'?
Suggestion: labels'; label's
...ents on it. It is worth noting that the labels expiration date was two months after th...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...emphasises the notice to consumers with an advice that do not consume if allergic to whea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13486005089 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81754198193 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559796437659 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8139013218 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.125 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326644255083 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10472153892 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518952888788 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210543030349 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291051164308 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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