Fossil fuels (e.g. coals, oil and gas) are the main source of energy for most countries. However, alternative sources of energy (e.g. wind and solar) have been encouraged to be used by some countries.
To what extent is this a positive or negative development?
Fossil fuels known as one of the most important resources of energy in worldwide. Beside this, in recent decades, use of other sources of energy(e.g. wind, solar) increase strictly in many countries. I strongly believe that using of alternative resources have many advantages for people and governments. Hence, I think they are positive investment.
There are several reasons for this view that alternative sources such as wind or solar are beneficial for people. In my view, the most important reason is, reduce pollution in cities also, decrease of disease among people. Nowadays, majority of cars as well as companies use of fossil fuels for energy production. Emission of toxic gases from these machines, like CO can have harmful impacts on the individual’s health and Ozone layer. The hearth problem and breathe damages because of inhaling toxic fumes in air are the sample of these diseases. In addition, penetrate of Ozone layer also, lead to publish of X-ray on the surface earth, that is destructive for human skin, and can become cause of skin illnesses. In contrast, Alternative sources, not only, do not have any above negative effects, but also help to clean air. Also, they are not harmful to people health. For this reason are suitable for using.
Another reason for being benefit alternative resources is, they are infinity and cheaper than fossil fuels. According to the witnesses of, fossil fuels will finish by 2050. Therefore, the governments should find other sources for replacing it. Wind and sun are the best substitute for it because, they are accessible everywhere. Likewise, cost of their production is much inexpensive compared to the fossil fuels. We need to the advance technologies along with special equipment for drilling earth in order to extraction of petroleum or gas. But, for producing of solar energy, such as, we just need the number of plate placed in front of the sun.
To sum up, use of replacing resources instead of fossil fuels, is an excellent idea, not only for people throughout the world because of reducing illnesses(e.g. heart ailment), but also is beneficial for government since, these sources are economical and available.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., hence, likewise, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18873239437 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72186733573 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585915492958 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8690944882 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291300812181 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813418533375 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652124779392 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180159107748 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732221932569 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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