In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the technological dominant time, high-tech is used for all types of cars like buses and trucks; accordingly, passengers will be served without drivers in a near future.in my opinion, the idea will bring more likely the benefits than the drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are many concerned options what the advantages are brought. First, controlling vehicles like cars, motorbike will be more easily than because when the driverless cars are attached a chip to know how it runs and avoid difficult barriers. Moreover, when government can manage all positions and action date of citizens’ vehicles ( cars, buses, ect. ,) combine with enactment of new rules, which help our society resolve traffic jam and reduce pollution; accordingly, social security system will protect personal safety from traffic accidents. Secondly, people can spend time to do other task like check crucial mail, prepare for assignments, r complete works which workers have finished yet before. Taking less time for sleeping as a prime example, when you need to stay awake at midnight and then you have to get up early to work; as a result, you will be half asleep, half-awake in the morning lead to happen accident easily. As if having an auto-car will help you add some hours to sleep enough and effective-work is better.
On the other hand, the devices also have different drawbacks. First, the using level of auto cars is easy or difficult depends on the different ages; in particular, senior citizens are usually had dementia so forgetting to press important keys will happen and this problem is so dangerous. Furthermore, they need to write address where they want to go, while they cannot see clearly alphabets lead to press wrong words, it will bring many dangerous results.
In conclusion, the advantage of driverless vehicles is so giant; however, they need to make sure safety individuals combine invent more suitable than for older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11075949367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63946820122 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655063291139 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3730222125 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255458915215 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795962713182 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581007400002 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138125605055 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624529232458 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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