While people in developing countries are happier than in the past, people in developed countries are less happy. Why? What can be learnt from this?
It is true that those living in powerhouses usually have more stressful and uncomfortable than when it is compared with people in growing nations who are considered happier. The essay aims to discuss about the reasons of this phenomenon as well as present some lessons from that.
On the one hand, there are many aspects which help individuals understand deeply why happiness often takes place more in developing states instead of advanced countries. Firstly, in the time of technological dominant, inhabitants who are living in growing nations have been higher a living standard and thence children are well-cultivated. Furthermore, promoting the public good helps promising jobs and reduces those living in poverty more than in the past as well as residents also avoid a part of financial burden and make them have an enjoyable life. Besides that, social progress helps the countries’ infrastructure such as medical facilities and the quality of medical specialists be improved and thus chronic diseases are cured with cutting-edge medicine by an easy way. As a result, patients will be widened longer expectancy to enjoy the outside world. In contrast, powerhouses have more affluent members of society than growing nations as well as personal finance, which each person have higher than. Therefore, the labor market has higher demands like education or experience with citizens in the powerhouses, so building up one’s good resume is necessary to find an ideal job because heavy competition cannot avoid in an high-education environment with many excellent people compared with those living in growing nations. Besides that, work environment will make employee undergo pressure about workload combined with wage. In advanced countries, everything is unaffordable so if citizens want to maintain a normal life, they need to earn a large number of money to expense for normal activities. Moreover, crime rate in the powerhouses is always higher than developing states and thus personal safety is not ensured as good as in the later nations. As a result, it can see clearly that living in the growing states is happier and more comfortable than in developed nations.
On the other hand, the lesson is presented from the problem which people should know. In particular, Material wealth does not equal happiness because monetary means are a means-to-an-end to assist people in achieving vital purposes. For instance, many people have a large amount of assets which it make its owner remind because they are scared that everyone make them friend with terrible purposes or not; therefore, they always feel lonely.
To sum up, living in developing states always feels better and happier than in advanced nations. Im my personal viewpoint, people should enjoyable life and they do not need to put financial situation into an very critical problem
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to promise' or 'promise'.
Suggestion: to promise; promise
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cause heavy competition cannot avoid in an high-education environment with many ex...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...intain a normal life, they need to earn a large number of money to expense for normal activities....
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... have a large amount of assets which it make its owner remind because they are scare...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... purposes or not; therefore, they always feel lonely. To sum up, living in devel...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ot need to put financial situation into an very critical problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in contrast, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2397.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27973568282 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80174912722 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546255506608 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3390473392 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197731679082 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621284057885 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044891563808 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122994869909 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117162184568 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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