In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without buying
There is no doubt that reading everything online is a consequential matter in modern society. This writer completely accept the idea that all people will read online news, so printed newspapers and books will no longer exist.
On the issue of online news, a key factor is that people can read them anywhere and anytime. It is vital to understand that online news create a situation in which people can read online news by using their mobile phones, laptops and notebooks. The situation generates an outcome whereby people can search for news whenever they want. There are further effects in the form of news from television which the broadcasting of news also make printed newspapers become extinct.
Another important element in reading online is no payment. As a consequence of the fact that online news are free to access, people can read them without paying. It is similarly true that people prefer to read for free instead of paying for it, so printed newspapers will disappear. In this regards, Thai newspapers are a prominent example, showing that they transform printed newspapers into online news and get income buy advertising.
The writer takes the view that people do not want to carry printed newspapers with themselves between the day. It should be abundantly clear that online news is really easy to access because of using internet which connect to all mobile phones. In this content, one can see why people prefer to look for news in the mobile phone than carry a lot of newspapers. Thus a plan for action should include the internet access which will provide people to able to search for online news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate a situation in which people can read online news by using their mobile phones...
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Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...o printed newspapers will disappear. In this regards, Thai newspapers are a prominen...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...spapers into online news and get income buy advertising. The writer takes the view...
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Line 4, column 361, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e phone than carry a lot of newspapers. Thus a plan for action should include the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, similarly, so, thus, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90545454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45823023083 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516363636364 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4102060485 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280463460413 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10435463369 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624570881871 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191618018243 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769394622741 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.