In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is estimated that printed newspapers and book will have become obsolete thanks for computers and mobile devices which will allow people to have access to these of electronic versions free of charge. I believe that people will leave behind traditional newspapers and books, and will adapt to new technology.

To access up-to-date information, people have to be online on a regular basis, even if paper-based newspapers have more advantages. Firstly, traditional newspapers and books are as more reliable as the Internet, not mentioned to being informative and verified. For example, local news which are published in the newspapers may be biased on the Internet. Therefore, unbiased sources of information are still printed newspapers and books. However, people are more likely be along with the trend and use devices to access online sources as it provides massive amount of information for free.

In addition to not requiring payment, people are accustomed to read online news which offers several user-friendly features. Take, for instance, subscription to online newspapers in which enabled pop-up notifications. Online users by using such functions, without doubt, would not miss any news and therefore, the demand for traditional newspapers is decreasing significantly. Furthermore, all that data which are obtained free of charge make people be even more addicted to them.

In conclusion, despite becoming less popular, printed newspapers are of reliance and provide proved sources. Nevertheless, people's attitude towards online newspapers are increasing for several reasons. I believe that online newspapers will be inseparable part of our life.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...massive amount of information for free. In addition to not requiring payment, pe...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to reading'.
Suggestion: accustomed to reading
...on to not requiring payment, people are accustomed to read online news which offers several user-f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63346613546 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98128850358 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7479402244 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196496124854 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796037133903 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401337052482 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135620160349 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324717651115 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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