In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, technology is developing year by year. Therefore majority of people prefer to read book or newspaper on electronic devices and online while it is easy and without difficulties. I think few people to read printed magazines currently time. Thus, I agree with this statement.
On the one hand, we can find a lot of rare books or materials on some web sites freely, because there are many online library, especially popular trading sites. Such as Amazon, Aliexpress and other sites. Electronic book and magazines have many advantages. For example, we can read whenever and wherever we want, because these books and newspapers will be on our gadgets. Moreover, when it is difficult to buy an expensive book, we can easily find and read it at a cheaper price. In addition, if almost all people will select online reading they by this choice help keeping environment. Consequently, papers are made from special trees.
On the other hand, traditional printed books and magazines have own value and benefits. Many older people remember the past and childhood by reading magazines. Thus, the olders appreciate newspaper and they keeping old newspapers still. Online reading has some disadvantages especially this digitalizing is particularly damaging to the human eye and brain.
In conclusion, after all, both online reading and printed books are important to someone, but in the future step by step print book will be repleaced by online books. However for me, the role of these printed books and newspapers remains significant and I think, I will continue to use them in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, after all, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11153846154 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76027129702 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2285385085 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1764705882 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349782585061 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979269433461 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758479667853 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203995851145 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347306703818 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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