Some people that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both of views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, advertising business is developing year by year and majority of people buying necessary goods by television posters. Other people think, that advertising is not single way should not so much pay attention to it. In my perspective view is almost all type of advertising becoming popular, especially web sites and TV.
On the one hand, advertisement is best and comfortable way of persuasion for people. If, someone decide showing own goods on TV, that person pay the advertising agency and in this way, it can bring good benefits to the customer. In addition, the advertisements demonstrate us the particular features and advantages of certain items. Especially, they give advise about how use the medicines or spices and how effect. Moreover, we do not just use from advertising to buy or sell, because we can also make different choices or recommendations that are important to our lives through television.
On the other hand, many people think, some poster can be deceptive and we should not believe it. It is true, while there are so many various announcement in currently time. Therefore, we do not know how information correct or incorrect. As a result, people are ignoring advertisements and losing interest in it. For instance, almost all people use the internet and we face to it everytime.
To sum up, publicity can be to share information and encourage people to buy and to sell things. I think, a business without posters is like a man without legs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.995951417 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00256409953 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8321228805 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32148918761 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994238580332 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702624331095 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182964354918 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707423736826 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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