In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay topics:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been suggested that people would choose online newspapers or book over printed one in the future due to free online resources. I partly agree with this statement.

First of all, online reading has been developing recently as many journalists and magazines have chose to move their contents on the Internet. This is a trend on account of a large number of people are having social media accounts nowadays, therefore online articles have more chance to be read than papered one.

Further more, people tend to think that they can find anything online and read without paying like buying a newspaper. Even though their reading are still counted to their Internet-using fee as wifi or 3G cost, online reading is still a wonderful choice. For instance, Google is claimed as a useful million-thing searcher, hence people have a wide range of information to read. Moreover, reading online is convenient because you can read things anywhere has Internet with just a smartphone, no need to bring lots of papers and heavy books anymore.

However, I believe that printed newspapers and bookdd will be still available in the future. There are many book-lovers all over the world and some people prefer papered to online ones because of many reasons, usually by some eyes problems they keep them from looking at a screen too much. Another reason is reading printed books bring you an indescribable feeling. While you're holding a book, you can feel its weight in your hands, smell the fresh paper and new ink. For bookholics, reading printed one is a relaxing enjoyment.

To sum up, the online-reading trend is increasing thanks to technology and its convenience, but printed newspapers and books will still play a small role in human life as they are always parts of our development. As a result, the mentioned statement is quite an one-side prediction.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
... as many journalists and magazines have chose to move their contents on the Internet....
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...Internet. This is a trend on account of a large number of people are having social media accounts...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 373, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ing you an indescribable feeling. While youre holding a book, you can feel its weight...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 260, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...esult, the mentioned statement is quite an one-side prediction.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99677419355 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67368764427 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3097240804 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323046156244 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108762037405 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619533985421 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178897566031 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511705324579 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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