The gap between rich and poor is growing What problems does this create What can be done to tackle them

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The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle them?

It is an irrefutable fact that the gap between rich and poor families is widening all over the world. Rich people are now consuming more, while poor people have to struggle to earn a living. This essay shall discuss the problems created and possible solution.

To begin with, infrastructure of the country depends on the balance between people in terms of their finances. If balanced is not achieved, then disparity is like that between skyscrapers and slums, which is not an ideal situation for all. Moreover, Another equally disturbing issue is the burgeoning rate of illiteracy because schools ...

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Average: 9.1 (8 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ances. If balanced is not achieved, then disparity is like that between skyscrape...
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...riate size of house compare to bungalow comprising of wide range of amenities. Secondly, the ...
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Suggestion: Despite
...my, infrastructure and education level. despite that, the government and communities sh...
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...mmunities should overcome these hurdles and and work to overcome financial disparity a...
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...d overcome these hurdles and and work to overcome financial disparity among citiz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49819494585 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83778395298 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.693484087 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126190872098 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393302221884 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465242094044 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808465809224 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774798002192 0.056905535591 136% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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