A good number of people say that children of families who reach the age of 18 should be required to leave the family and live independtly henceforth. To what extand do you agree or disagree with reasons and examples.
Children are the apple of their parents’s eyes but being self-reliance is an unavoidable matter. There is a statement that when children reach the age of 18, parents should let them stand on their own feet from day forth. This writer spouse a diverse take on the matter that live far from home at the age of 18 is not an viable theory since the same is not meritories due to the devoid of finance and experience.
This writer maintains a divergent view from the claim on the basis of the fact that children cannot affort the payment of their life which contains massive tuition fee and house cost since they are in dearth of experiences. To be specific, children under 18 donot have to aflict about fiscal matter on account of the fact that parents furnish adequate requisite for their offsprings. Even if they want to underwent liberated life, it is unattainable to earn sufficent expanditure as long- term salary without degree.
Dissipated living is another matter that corroborates the argument previously made for the bare reason that many children chase after temptation without the dessuasion of parents who have exposured to a quantity of occurences in their life. Due to the absence of supervison and appreciation when stay far from home, children facilely abandon themselves and disregard of the consequences caused by their infantile age.
It is however claimed by a seperate school of thought that living indepently since 18 years old would be beneficial for children to have various of practical skills. However, adolescents are also able to gain these skills in a remarkable way when they live with parents. Besides, it is indispensable for children to consider themself whether they are mature and proficient in every prospect of life to leave their parental house.
All things considered, I believe that children should live with their parents until they are ready to join the society in a stable way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Consider replacing "in a remarkable way" with adverb for "remarkable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ents are also able to gain these skills in a remarkable way when they live with parents. Besides, i...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a stable way" with adverb for "stable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ntil they are ready to join the society in a stable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98136645963 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70564453059 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0502345085 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155254831064 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629545405281 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334783404626 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948775310083 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277293696304 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.