Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.
To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved?
What are the drawbacks?
The world is now developing with a rapid speed in all aspects and people concern about education more with every passing day. It seems to be a positive trend that children can have better environment by learning overseas. However, this trend makes both dominances and hassles affected to personal accompanied by community.
Studying abroad is possessed with a litany of merits and benefit and primordial of which is surpassable education. Foreign college not only providing high quality facilities but also has a quandary of professional lecturers. Students will have chance to deepen specialist knowledge thanks to the modernized equipment and talented leader. Furthermore, on account of partial intern, students will has experience adequately, thus they have more opportunities in their future work.
While the gamut of benefits is imposingly persuasive the fact that handicap are inevitable and a classic proof of this is brain drain. When people stays in the foreign country a trivial of years, getting used to living in better standard, higher salaries and advanced technology leads to decide to settle down in the country. Moreover, a quantities graduated students who want to chase for their professional career or reputation leaves their native soil. This social evil was extreme detrimental to the native country due to human capital flight.
All things consider, learning oversea afflicted with both merits and downsides. However, I believe that government with have the suitable remedies to deal with the hassle and improved the plus factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46694214876 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80090009146 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673553719008 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7391519783 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131717880781 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419065156371 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336654742112 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668975993336 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450112138668 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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