Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved What are the drawbacks | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad.
To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves
and the countries involved?
What are the drawbacks?

The world is now developing with a rapid speed in all aspects and people
concern about education more with every passing day. It seems to be a
positive trend that children can have better environment by learning
overseas. However, this trend makes both dominances and hassles
affected to personal accompanied by community.
Studying abroad is possessed with a litany of merits and benefit and
primordial of which is surpassable education. Foreign college not only
providing high quality facilities but also has a quandary of professional
lecturers. Students will have chance to deepen specialist knowledge thanks
to the modernized equipment and talented leader. Furthermore, on
account of partial intern, students will has experience adequately, thus
they have more opportunities in their future work.
While the gamut of benefits is imposingly persuasive the fact that handicap
are inevitable and a classic proof of this is brain drain. When people stays
in the foreign country a trivial of years, getting used to living in better
standard, higher salaries and advanced technology leads to decide to settle
down in the country. Moreover, a quantities graduated students who want
to chase for their professional career or reputation leaves their native soil.
This social evil was extreme detrimental to the native country due to
human capital flight.
All things consider, learning oversea afflicted with both merits and
downsides. However, I believe that government with have the suitable

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... but also has a quandary of professional lecturers. Students will have chance to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61904761905 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82447545361 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679653679654 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3538132338 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137023320075 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419065156371 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336654742112 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0321281600956 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408835385976 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, while

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