Government should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Government should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is believed that scientific project should be supported and Monitored by the Government instead of Institutions. This essay agrees with the statements because the result by the Government will be available to the public as well as trusted while private companies seem to give a commercial bias.

When the Scientific breakthrough funded by the government, the results would obviously become free for politics. This because the projects will be established in open source such us uploaded in journals or other references. People can access the researchers as they believe the trustworthy of the information. Take the US as the best example for this, Obama’s ex-Administration are committed funding the National Science Foundation doing investigations in purpose to make available and useful for its society. As a result, the Innovation in the USA increased dramatically.

Private companies which controlled a scientific project have a tendency to broads a discrimination publicity. This because they have absolute control over what is published. Without the approval of the companies, the scientists cannot publish since the projects belong to them, It obviously does not make sense for a company to publish negative results which could impact their business. For example, the drug company In India has produced a traditional drug for disease in the EU countries that has investigated by 2 Indian scientists which now European Medicines Agency (EMA) has recommended suspending a number of nationally approved medicines due to unreliable and cannot be accepted as a basis for marketing authorization in the EU. As the consequences of this phenomenon, the research project from institutions is not trusted anymore.

To sum up, it is very beneficial if the scientific project under the auspices of the government because of the accessible of the researchers itself.

Votes
Average: 9.3 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47586206897 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23716527246 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2928012307 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230603854488 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782875032529 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466134759552 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139208790481 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029937964148 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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