There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. some believe that money is main reason.
The loyalty of workers at one company can be inspiring by many factors. It is believed that financial rewards are the major purpose of workers. This essay agrees with the statement because workers have a tendency to stay if they have a big salary.
On the one hand, many of consideration that employees are encouraged to work for a long time in one company. Some of them can be influenced by job satisfaction, ongoing training, perks, pay increments or even job prospect. But if we consider carefully, this is related to money. looking for the job prospect, employees work hard in order to get a promotion, this is inevitably they can earn much money as they get a high position in the company. take an example based on my experienced, My Aunt is a teacher in Senior High School In Mamuju city in West Celebes. She has been staying at the school for more than 20years then she became a Head Master there and gain more salary.
On the other hand, financial rewards are the priority workers being loyal to the same firm, If they have served or have got a high income in the company, the would not be looking for other company although they do not comfortable in the workplace take Ronaldo Cristiano as an example, He is professional football players from Spanish and join in Real Madrid club, he rejected other company that wants to join its club because his salary still bigger than what the company serve. This means that money is the foremost thing why workers just work at one company for a long time.
To sum up, the long period of workers stay at the same company is encouraged by many factors but the most common is due to money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55067567568 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.457730217 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.149784829 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198072138993 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763326390662 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04535771726 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122802371148 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411671147326 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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