The government should close companies that provide toxic waste materials without their own waste treatmemt facility in order to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Industrialization, nowadays, has become a alarming problem causing harmful effects to the environment. In order to stop it , many people think that, the government should shut down the companies, who do not have the proper management of their toxic waste materials. I completely agree with the statement as such industries affect the surroumdings directly.
Numerous factories have been already established which are producing goods at high speed. With the production, also generates toxic substances in the form of gas or liquid. And due to lack of their treatment, they spread out and mix up with the nature causing air and water pollution. The density of carbonmonoxides and sulphurdioxides in air rises which increases the global warming. We can see such industries in India in large numbers. So, to minimize such troubles, government should act strong on those matters.
Moreover,because of the pollution, health of human beings have been degraded. People are easily caught by air-borne and water-borne diseases. Furthermore, chemicals from those companies fuses directly with the water sources, descructing the habitat of aquatic plants and animals. As a result, their number decreases and they may even get extinct .
To summarize, the toxic materials causes great harm to the living organisms and the surroundings. Therefore, the companies must be closed by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52112676056 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17560332267 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694835680751 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4906222388 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138045763997 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378972028856 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479074191818 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863570245043 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562917813306 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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