Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things. Agree or disagree?
public celebrations have always played a very important role in preserving values of culture. that is why the authority parts with a large sum of money to celebrate those festivals. However it is thought that dollars spent on such occasions, which is considered excessive, ought to be given away to other things. From my point of view, that the activities are carefully organized is justifiable.
First and foremost, anniversaries held help to commemorate the milestones of a nation or a community. it is regarded as an effective way to remind the young generations of their indigenous culture. they are likely to understand their countries'time-honoured traditions and customs. By way of illustration, Vietnamese Tet, known as Lunar New Year, is a national holiday on which people have chance to go back to their neighborhood and experience fascinating activities such as cooking Banh Chung( the savoury sticky rice cake) and preparing many delicious food.
what is more, that the government spends money on public celebrations enables citizens to reminisce the work of their forefathers who have made a large contribution to the development of the society; thus, they will show respect to their ancestors and treasure what they have at the present. Vietnam independence day, annually taken place on September 2nd, is the day that the Vietnamese celebrate their glorious past with pride and know what the soldiers had to sacrifice for the country's evolution.
In conclusion, money should be expended on festivals due to its great significance to the growth of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26984126984 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18718488925 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2306645761 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195477910802 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590490834585 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490663055448 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105737005641 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290267917993 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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