The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the ratio of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three 3 different nations namely Japan, Sweden and the USA. It is measured in percentage.
Overall, the all nations saw fluctuations all over the period and they assumed to increase by 2040.Moreover, it assumed Japan and the USA swap their positon but Sweden retain it’s spot.
A more detail look at the chart reveals, in 1940 the ratio of the population in Japan was 5 percent and after that it started to diminish and it continued until 1985. during 1985-2030, there will be a constant rise and the percentage of Japan will be more than doubled. At the end of the period, Japan's proportion of the population will grow sharply (roughly tripled).
According to the graph, the percentage of the ratio of the population in Sweden and the USA calculated about 7 and 9 percent respectively and the proportion of both of them grew until 1980 (approximately 15%). However, the ratio of the USA will dramatically decline between 1980 and 2020 and then it will be reach more than 25%. Sweden experienced an upward trend with a minor fluctuation and the percentage of the population will more than 25%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79292929293 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82471365702 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489898989899 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2329968745 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142369174506 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064043320649 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744246322066 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114067982753 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795863224605 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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