The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with health care issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity has become a significant health issue almost all over the world; associated co- morbidities have been putting a mounting pressure on country’s medical system. Some people believe that introduction of more sports and exercise to school children would be the optimum solution for this problem. Beginning at the level of the kids is indeed the ideal way to tackle this issue in the long run.
Schools are the best place to start with in order to create a physically active culture because when kids become adults, they will keep on doing what they were taught at school. In other words, it is much easier to make something a habit for kids than grownups. So, taking part more sports in school, such as running, cycling, jumping and swimming, will therefore surely build an interest; in turn they will be keen on those activities over boring classroom lessons. Making things better is that they will keep on participating sports when they become adults. Hence, in the long term, this method would be the best to combat the obesity related health issues.
In addition to that, children are a powerful mean to persuade their family members including parents, grandparents and other grownup siblings. Were youngsters to prefer outdoor activities than to watch television on Saturdays, adults will definitely get influenced by this behavior and will go out where they become more active. Adult involvement is the key to cut down the health care cost as they are the ones who suffer mostly from diseases associate with overweight, such as hypertension, diabetes and cardiovascular diseases. However, one may argue that healthy food habits would be the primary solution for the obese individuals. Of course, healthy eating plays a role in lowering obesity, but burning calorie is the long term solution, whereby all the metabolic diseases can be eliminated.
In conclusion, among the methods available to fight overweight, the best one would be to involve school children in sports because it can build a new culture and more importantly, will foster adults to be more physically active.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1195335277 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64898607346 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.130969278 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164557452537 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545579523446 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512471047251 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107392975185 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441064082294 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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