Happiness can be bought with money according to some people, but others believe it can not be purchased

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this highly suspected scenario , everyone is hurries, worries and tensio...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...everyone is hurries, worries and tension . Everyone become a rat race to earn mone...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Happiness
...veryone become a rat race to earn money.Happiness play paramount role in everyones life ....
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Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ss play paramount role in everyones life . According to my belief happiness canno...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... my belief happiness cannot be purchased .everyone is happy likes rich and poor .a...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d .everyone is happy likes rich and poor .apart from that ,its no matter a rich pe...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ppy likes rich and poor .apart from that ,its no matter a rich person is always ha...
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Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...y likes rich and poor .apart from that ,its no matter a rich person is always happy...
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Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... no matter a rich person is always happy , everyone needs to be happy .in addition...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lways happy , everyone needs to be happy .in addition , happiness is important for...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... everyone needs to be happy .in addition , happiness is important for the developm...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...is important for the development of body .happiness can only develop by good behav...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...iness can only develop by good behaviour , helps each other and coperative with ea...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ach other and coperative with each other .morover ,happy person gives smile to an...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and coperative with each other .morover ,happy person gives smile to another onc...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with each other .morover ,happy person gives smile to another once face .happin...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...person gives smile to another once face .happiness doesnt needs money only needs ...
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Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s smile to another once face .happiness doesnt needs money only needs to coperative an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, apart from, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 531.0 1615.20841683 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79654531831 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 176.041082164 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76 0.561755894193 135% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 506.74238477 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.671923238 49.4020404114 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.0 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273917834056 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122562475968 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12825609813 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174360194987 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125277602038 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.