Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Genius is one percent , inspiration and 99 percent perspiration...
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... inspiration and 99 percent perspiration . In this modern epoch ,life is full of ...
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...ent perspiration . In this modern epoch ,life is full of competitive world .some ...
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...epoch ,life is full of competitive world .some people think that sucess is achieve...
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...ink that sucess is achieved by hard work .whereas, determination helps a person to...
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...tion helps a person to set goals in life . Hardwork plays a vital role in everyone...
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...ork plays a vital role in everyones life .lf a person works hard he wi defenately ...
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...d he wi defenately achieve goal his life . We cannot achieve success with the help...
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...t achieve success with the help of money . Money helps a person to set their busin...
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...ney helps a person to set their business .they also needs hardwork to get name , t...
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...person to set their business .they also needs hardwork to get name , to fame in life ...
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...ss .they also needs hardwork to get name , to fame in life . According to me hardw...
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...s hardwork to get name , to fame in life . According to me hardwork and determinat...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ardwork to get name , to fame in life . According to me hardwork and determination play an inde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 484.0 1615.20841683 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76954224087 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 153.0 506.74238477 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5449814206 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179118127097 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829346603738 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674084828442 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929880389583 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929880389583 0.056905535591 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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