Genius is one percent , inspiration and 99 percent perspiration .
In this modern epoch ,life is full of competitive world .some people think that sucess is achieved by hard work .whereas, determination helps a person to set goals in life . Hardwork plays a vital role in everyones life .lf a person works hard he wi defenately achieve goal his life . We cannot achieve success with the help of money . Money helps a person to set their business .they also needs hardwork to get name , to fame in life . According to me hardwork and determination play an indesble role in everyones life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Genius is one percent , inspiration and 99 percent perspiration...
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Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... inspiration and 99 percent perspiration . In this modern epoch ,life is full of ...
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Line 2, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent perspiration . In this modern epoch ,life is full of competitive world .some ...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...epoch ,life is full of competitive world .some people think that sucess is achieve...
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Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ink that sucess is achieved by hard work .whereas, determination helps a person to...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tion helps a person to set goals in life . Hardwork plays a vital role in everyone...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ork plays a vital role in everyones life .lf a person works hard he wi defenately ...
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Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d he wi defenately achieve goal his life . We cannot achieve success with the help...
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Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t achieve success with the help of money . Money helps a person to set their busin...
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Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ney helps a person to set their business .they also needs hardwork to get name , t...
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Line 2, column 390, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...person to set their business .they also needs hardwork to get name , to fame in life ...
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Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ss .they also needs hardwork to get name , to fame in life . According to me hardw...
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Line 2, column 434, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s hardwork to get name , to fame in life . According to me hardwork and determinat...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ardwork to get name , to fame in life . According to me hardwork and determination play an inde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 484.0 1615.20841683 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76954224087 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 176.041082164 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 153.0 506.74238477 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5449814206 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179118127097 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829346603738 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674084828442 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929880389583 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929880389583 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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