In this modern of era of science and technology ,people comsume more natural resources for their personal use. The consumption of this natural resources such as oil and water that are non renewable are at alarming rate which need to be retrospective.
There can be plethora of cause of this fact. Primarily, people invent new things that consume more natural resources. Moreover increase population is the mother of all disease which is the main cause of increasing use of natural resources. Apart from that more and more industries set up that use large quantities of oil in machines and water to cool the machines after use. Nowadays, means of transportation are also increasing rapidly that need more oil for their use to move from one place to another.
Ingnorance is not the only option against prevention. Every one shold should take step toward this problem . Government is the gaurdain of its citizens. Therfore government should ban the consumption of natural resources that are im danger not for future use but for future generations. In addition to it, pay high taxes on user of non renewable resources. Moving further, government should control the area of those resources from where oil and water found so that their consumption can be controlled.
In the epligoue, natural resources are for every generation so that people have duty to control their use. Therefore, future generations will enjoy those all natural resources given by nature as a gift for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: of course
...retrospective. There can be plethora of cause of this fact. Primarily, people invent ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...gs that consume more natural resources. Moreover increase population is the mother of al...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat more and more industries set up that use large quantities of oil in machines ...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ng rapidly that need more oil for their use to move from one place to another. I...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...old should take step toward this problem . Government is the gaurdain of its citiz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08196721311 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73821278321 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536885245902 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2003069355 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154761309138 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519088850242 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591891385971 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102779562625 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454257274551 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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