Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
I agree that happiness is very important in life and it has impacts on our lives. Unfortunately, it might not be easy to achieve happiness in some situations and positions in life.
Nowadays most people suffer from depression, but it does not mean that they cannot achieve happiness. People have a tendency to get sad over things that they cannot control which is a big issue in a way for happiness. However, there is always a way out from the dark, deep, and depressed phases, even though it looks like the end of the world and there is no way out. Sometimes life can be hard and it can be felt like the worst version it could ever be, yet that is so not true. From my point of view, it is just a phase and in the result, people will come through it even if it might take such a long time.
Happiness is hard to define because it depends on the person, their personality, lifestyle, point of view and many more. If it was asked to people the “what is happiness” question, each person’s answer would differ from each other. The people from the same age group, same culture, and the same goals in life would have a similar definition of happiness. Because there are triggers for happiness just like in sadness related to our life goals, dreams, satisfactions also perceived productivity and the other factors. Some people might not find joy in almost anything, while for some it can be easy to find happiness in small things. For some people eating ice cream would be plenty of reason to be happy, while for some it might be not satisfying enough.
In conclusion, happiness depends on living conditions and can be varying. The reasons to be happy and the meaning of happiness could be different for every person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 730, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...on to be happy, while for some it might be not satisfying enough. In conclusion, happiness dep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57741935484 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49203726695 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.5201144659 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194417258817 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828695001935 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921800265236 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166460852042 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124595999512 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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