happiness is considered very important in life.why is it difficult to define? what factors are important in achieving happiness?
It is no doubt true that the majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. While the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there seem to be some common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness.
happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual. Nobody can fully understand another person’s feelings, and we all have our own passions which we take pleasure from. Many people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success, whereas, for others, health and family are much more important. At the same time, a range of feelings may be associated with the idea of happiness, and the same person may feel happy in a variety of different ways.
While it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, there are some basic preconditions to achieve it. First of all, it hard to be happy if he or she does not have a safe place to live or food to eat. our basic survival needs must be met before we can lead a pleasant life. What is more, the greatest joy in life is usually found in shared experiences with family and friends. In fact, it is rare to find a person who is content to live in isolation. Furthermore, other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose of life.
In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular to each individual, and basic needs for shelter, food, and company need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Happiness
...o experiencing or achieving happiness. happiness is difficult to define because it means...
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Suggestion: Our
...ve a safe place to live or food to eat. our basic survival needs must be met before...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, first of all, what is more, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73062730627 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74068656776 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583025830258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9339194985 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188698369766 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688130842627 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524635650173 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122162442516 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137916332797 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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