Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experience

Contentment is believed to have an immense significance for people; thus, it is considered to be an indispensable part of life. However, achieving happiness has become the most challenging issue in this fast-moving world, but there are some foremost factors to derive happiness. Further, the analyzation for both viewpoints is to be commenced in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are some of the certain reasons, which need to be thought behind the difficulty of attaining pleasure. Firstly, the less ability to understanding the feelings seems to be a major factor for this issue as most of the people are unable to understand the sentiments of someone to make him or her glad; thus, it leads to unhappiness. Secondly, high expectations are also associated with the difficulty of achieving happiness, since modern people tend to expect a lot in their life(tend to have high expectations ); hence, they keep on doing hard work for getting success, and therefore, it becomes a big hindrance in their happiness.
Happiness seems to depend on some eminent factors, the first and foremost is a positive attitude; consequently, people should help each other emotionally and physically in order to get pleasure. Besides this, the happy family environment also directly links with happiness, where the members can love and care for each other. Therefore, it should be necessary for everyone’s life to deriving contentment. Moreover, the regular physical exercises may help to gain cheerfulness because these are not only to fit the health, but also act as a stress buster. Meanwhile, the person gets calmness, and thereafter, it becomes convenient for an individual to get happiness.
In conclusion, although getting happiness is the most complicated task in this competitive world, yet it seems to be easy for obtaining with the help of some appropriate methods, which can be done by every individual for their own welfare.

Votes
Average: 7.9 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27035830619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08120133274 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4676207911 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111734511577 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044141172811 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294923614526 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778523467215 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282467109962 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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